This is a great debut story! I was drawn in by the characters and their stories from the get-go. I could feel Charlie's heart break upon seeing Kegan at the bar after so many years. Someone else mentioned editing issues, and I'll have to agree. It's a really bad pet peeve that I seem to have no control over... I just notice the errors, and it pulls me out of the story briefly. Thankfully the story was so great that it sucked me right back in. I would love to see if Kegan and Trevor explore their love further. Charlie obviously doesn't have a problem with their feelings for each other, so hopefully they can figure it out. I would look forward to reading more from this author.