I was so confused at first, lol. I finally realized the gist of everything and how everything fit together, but at first it looked like it was going to be porn without plot. There was a lot of sex, right off the bat. Slowly, we learn more about him and about her. We learn why they've been less than 100% honest with each other, and ultimately there's an HEA, so I can't complain. I think I would have preferred more details or more buildup or something before they just had immediate sparks, she kicks everyone out, and they start to get it on, and on, and on.... It is very creative what can happen with an artist with lots of different types of media on hand, lol!