This was just dumb. I know there are men who write erotica perfectly fine, but this was just not erotica. Written porn maybe, and not good written porn. Perhaps this was not written for women because there was no real build-up, no relationship, no emotional tie. Even when each of the sisters came it was just there. They came. Yay. Goodie for them. Oh, and the mailman did too. Bully for him. I guess I need more emotion in a story. Or SOME emotion besides just getting your jollies. Don't think I'll go for any more from this author. There's lots of it on Amazon, but if this is representative of what he writes, I'm so not interested.